First Scene Edit

Service Description

I will read a scene from your play (I can work with any scene, but the first scene is often the best in terms of the amount of feedback I am able to give). I will be able to give you detailed feedback on: - Character - Dialogue - Pacing - Place and Space I can also highlight specific lines/moments, looking at how successfully you achieve tension, foreshadowing, exposition, etc, depending on your intentions for the script. For example, if you're writing a romantic comedy, have you clearly established the love interests? Have we successfully established the domus and are there hints as to how that might be torn down in following scenes? Have you hooked us as the audience? HOW TO BOOK 1. Send an email to 'nikkiacquah@hotmail.co.uk' with the title FIRST SCENE EDIT and your NAME. 2. Attach the scene